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Stop Abuse

Who hears
          plaintive crying?
                Deaf ears.

        Closed eyes.
            Fragile spirit
                dead lies.
                           
          Life lost,
              shallow the grave.
                  What cost?                                       

                Stained cheek,
                    for tender soul.
                      I'll speak.

                  Raised voice
                      throat spewing words.
                        What choice?

                  Touch hearts,
                        defy the hate.
                            Change starts.
                       

Author notes

this form is a musette.. and has a definite syllable count... and scheme... read about it...and STOP THE HURT option 1

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  • DragonBlue gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    Short but Sweet!

    Love the form and depth of very few words said in a loud voice. Your write is exceptional, thank you for entering it in my contest.

    Blessed Be~
    )O(
    DragonBlue


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 17, 2008
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    I like this very much, desi.