Love is a thing of tomorrow.
Poetry gave her today;
Silken-wrapped inward,
Her heart is a coveted gift,
Toted in her satchel.
Like a palette of liquid prisms,
It leaks from ripped stitching
Onto cement sidewalks
Leaving pools of crystal rainbows,
And follows her around,
Waiting for someone to get lost in its beauty.
Author notes
From Poetryality's prompt:
"poetry gave her today
silken-wrapped inward
toted in her satchel
it leaks from ripped stitching
onto cement sidewalks
and follows her around"
A contest entry
- Collaborate with me... by poetryality.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is exceptional! The colors are a kaleidoscope of beauty! Breathtaking! I am thorougly impressed. The seamless weaving of our words makes me exceeding glad here poet.
Thank you for the opportunity to collaborate. It was my pleasure. I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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I like this. I like the description and the form you put it in. Great Write.
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Great job. All the best in the contest
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Like a palette of liquid prisms,
oooh i love that one
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beautiful
great take
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