The black cat is sneaking
The floorboards are creaking
The pale ghost is booing
The witches are brewing
Werewolves are howling
Drooling and growling
The children run for candy
Getting their treats so dandy
But there is one who creeps
And in daytime he sleeps
Waiting for halloween prey
To keep his thirst at bay
The mighty vampire is he
He goes on a killing spree
It's human blood he craves
Until he returns to the grave
Author notes
halloween! i love it!
A contest entry
- Halloween Spooky Stories Form Contest - Teens 13-17 by Shutting down.
1800 points, ended November 1, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 2008 Allpoetry Halloween Bash by Little Eagle.
12350 points, ended November 21, 2008, 61 entries
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What did you think
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I think you did a great job on your rhyme and flow in this piece. I like the lead up to the vampire, it made for great fun and shivers.
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Thank you for your entry
Very cute. I like it.
Thank you for entering. Good luck in the contest and thank you for following the rules.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment
Happy Halloween and God Bless
Tammy
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Very fun Halloween write to read
I enjoyed the drama and you rhymed it very very well
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Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
Co-Judge
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This is great! I can see that the Vampire is just waiting in the shadows to pounce! Well done.
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Good luck in the contest!
The Vampire!
This is a great little Halloween poem. You have included all the required elements for a wonderful spooky fun night.
Nicely done!
~Kristy
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