Life's a beach me deary
let me hold your derriere
Hold onto mine if your want to
I don't really care
That lunch has me so bloated
these swimmers much too tight
This gas I feel risin'
could blow me out of site
So hang on tight I ask ya
let wind blow free I know
so get ready for the blast off
cos I am letting go
Author notes
Picture courtesy of Photobucket--Artist Unknown
A contest entry
- Big Points Funny Rhymer VII by BuriedTreasures.
6000 points, ended October 27, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A very humorous take on the picture---Thank you for your entry!
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this gave me quite a chuckle....though i wonder should "derryaire" be "derriere"?
Best of luck
sooty -
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fixed it *smile* I am glad you had a chuckle.
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A smile snuck across my face when i read this one Most enjoyable Well done Good luck in the contest
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A cute, short and humorous write and a good take on the picture.
I wish you Good Luck in the contest!
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Cute
Funny cute
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Forgot your clappy guys.
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Hilarious
Ha! Ha! This so damn cute, and way too funny! LOL Thanks so much for the belly laugh tonight.
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