Hoooney I told you we should not have come
I’m tired and hungry and I’m not having fun
Look at these awful bodies you put us in
What were you thinking, I’ve got two chins
Extra hands might have come in handy but Nooooo
You had to come to earth where none of our friends go
There’s beautiful weather on Alpha-San Torian Fest
Instead of stuck with these humans with their overcooked flesh
Goodness you can’t even eat them, no, not anymore
Years ago it was like a smorgasbord with choices galore
When did the primitives learn how to use guns
They keep taking our things and then away they run
The next one that says “Stick Em Up” I’m having a snack
Stick What Up anyway?; No dear you won’t hold me back
What’s that you say we can take some back home
Good idea it’s a long ride I’ll be hungry to the bone
This Florida vacation sounded like a real good treat
Yet we end up with barely next to any one to eat
The next time you have a great vacation idea think again
Just leave it to me, I’ll tell you where, how, and when
Author notes
Picture coutesy of Photobucket--Artist Unknown
A contest entry
- Big Points Funny Rhymer VII by BuriedTreasures.
6000 points, ended October 27, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A very interesting and somewhat, unique take on the prompt!
Thank you for your entry!
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If nothing else I do have wierd ideas. LOL God Bless, Jo-Ann
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LMAO
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Thanks for stopping by God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Great! I love the wit in this piece. Well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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This is such an awesome take on the picture prompt!!! I just love the imagery. You have a great sense of humor.
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Thank you so very much daviscth I am glad you liked it. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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A very unique and interesting take on the picture.
Very creative and imaginative.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leaving such a nice comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Oh my goodness!! This is one of your best! I've been tring to come up with something for this contest but...yours is so amazing I couldn't come close!
I'm still thinking of something we could do together! It would be an honor! Thanks for sharing your wonderful imagination!
Best of luck
darlintlc
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Thank you so much for your kindness. I would enjoy very much collaboration between us another thing on AP that I haven't done yet. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Wow, talk about an original take on the picture. I entered this contest and then decided to check out what others came up with, and I can tell you I was not expecting something like this. Funny write. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thanks for taking the time to read and conment. I look forward to reading your work. Good luck and God Bless, Jo-Ann
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