The real world
Hurt
Pain
Ignorance
Gossip
Don’t like it
Running hiding
In my room
Heart beating
Heart breaking
Thinking
Resting
Sleeping
The dream world
Bliss
Happiness
Joy
Belonging
Don’t want to leave
Waking
Silent tears
Back to real world
Hurt
Pain
Ignorance
Gossip
Don’t like it
Wanting to go
Back to
Dreams
A contest entry
- Contest #1: The Cycle of Falling Down by PaleRaven9790.
900 points, ended October 19, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I get the cycle you're speaking of... but it is a bit sad for a poem. I guess I should've expected that...plus, sadness and longing are the easiest things to write about.
Thanks for entering my contest...and another contest too, apparently. Best of luck.
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thanks
thanks I think.. lol I'm really not sure if thats a good compliment or not but hey I'll take it. So thanks for your point of view I love when people take the time to write comments.
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