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Evil Intent

Liquor slithers like molasses, weighed down with such evil intent. Alcohol is a voyeur to the highest degree, waiting for the weekends to commence it's ugliest battles, for entertainment. It's morals have expired while it's conscience went out of style. The people, riding high off it's pleasures, are slaves being watched with divine perception. Being flexible, it can throw it's weight around from the foot on
the gas pedal to the fisted hand against someone's face. At every event's end unheard applause floats as it moves on to the next charged and unsuspecting victim.

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  • cindyloo
    October 17, 2008
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    This is great. I like how you show alcohol as cunning and evil like a demon that will sneak up and take control of you. Very powerful write.