You were never
A hero in my eyes.
Beat me down,
Rip me up
While the tears
Fall with silent
Crys.
You are a fake
And a two faced
Liar, a shitty
Husband and
A fucked up father.
You always speak
Like your word is fact.
Every single time we
Talk I feel like I'm
Under an attack.
There's no way to win
Or dodge your evil sins.
I'll never forget
Those dreaded
Days, they're
All impacted in my
brain.
I can't be perfect
All the time.
I slip up, I fall,
I crash and can't
Ever stand too tall.
You knock me down
Every time.
You expect me to
Be flawless and
I can't seem to
manage that.
I feel so
stressed out,
I want to scream
and fucking shout.
I have turned
To self mutilation
To help myself
With concentration.
I have to be able
To control some part
Of who I am.
You'd never understand.
I feel so trapped
Behind how you've
Shaped me.
I always feel so out of the
Loop because after you I just
Want to stand alone.
I don't want anyone to
Treat me like you did.
I'm too scared to
Have my trust and heart
broken again and again.
You've made me
A cold hearted,
Stubborn bitch
And for that I hate
You, you fucking
Piece of shit.
Don't expect me
To stick around
Forever.
I'll get out one
Day and transform
Into someone I
Can love and treasure.
A contest entry
- Write about a person. by samantha jean.
600 points, ended October 31, 2008, 28 entries
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Wow.
I can feel the raw anger, frustration, fury, and even a bit of sorrow in it. Nicely written, and with a little hope at the end...I wish more people could see that hope in more situations... -
You've made me
A cold hearted,
Stubborn bitch
And for that I hate
You, you fucking
Piece of shit.
Don't expect me
To stick around
Forever.
I'll get out one
Day and transform
Into someone I
Can love and treasure
that is amazinggggggggggg! -
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Thank you :]]
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I like the anger in this.
Despite it's length it flows very well, that's hard to do.
Good job, thank you for entering. -
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Thanksss
Well, I'm pretty angry .. XP
And no problem, happy to enter.
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"You always speak like your word is fact." I know people like that and it drives me up the wall. All the other details sound pretty dreadful to. Good luck with not sticking around forever.
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Thank you
Yeh, people who always think they're right piss me off.
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