She flies with grace
with the wind beneath her wings.
She glides along
without a care in the world.
She is beautiful
in more ways than one.
For she is love
she is grace.
Author notes
not good but I did try
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A contest entry
- sparrow by Saffron.
900 points, ended November 7, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You know something--the only thing I didn't like about this was your author's notes--you must give yourself more credit than that! This is simple and lovely, and yes--graceful.
Thank you so much for entering this contest.
Saffron
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thanks for saying that. Sometimes I just don't have any confidance in what I write.
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