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savour the flavour

of

clever

endeavours

haste can never

taste

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Cannonsfire
    October 16, 2008
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    slow licks...I can relate


  • notorious
    October 16, 2008

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    'haste' and 'taste'
    So, so clever.

    And LoL, the poem looks like a freaking tree!!

    Not only do you have kick-ass DICTION, but your grammar is impeccable.

    Jessica


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 16, 2008
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    POwerful impact
    well done here
    best wishes in
    contest.

    Love

    Passions


  • Arkbear gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    Excellent Form........great passage...........a nice way to look at life.....nice job Bro

     

     

    Good luck & God bless you!

     

    Bear ~