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Redemption

The prize came today,
after the long, hard flight.
We never thought the day would come,
for so long was the night.

However it wasn't packaged,
not in colors of pink or green,
and yet, still it came.
And to me, it meant everything.

Instead it brought me happiness.
Nothing something a person could buy.
Though its mystery is unknown,
I don't need to know the reason why.

Today this thing came,
from which my spirits would lift.
But what came wasn't wrapped;
it was another kind of gift.

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  • kiwi bird
    October 16, 2008

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    Heehee this is really cute...it reminds me of "How the Grinch Stole Xmass"
    "It came without ribbons, it came without tags, it came without packages boxes or bags...But it came, it came just the same."
    ahh, some of the better moments in my childhood!
    bravo bravo...