A most loving couple were Uncle Bob and his wife,
Neither of them too far from the afterlife,
Making the most of the days that remain,
With bodies that are willing, but lacking the brain.
As the years passed, their senses diminished,
Between the ears and the mind, the sparks were finished,
Which explains why they took the downtown commute,
In matching tiny leopard-skin bathing suits.
Uncle Bob was excited for the big night to come,
Couldn’t half help himself from grabbin’ her bum,
Packed in her bag were all the right tools,
As his mind wandered off he constantly drooled.
An invitation you see, he received on the phone,
For couples like you, so don’t come alone,
There will be a big stage with various acts,
Exploits that the likes of you will attract.
Unfortunately Bob got the idea all wrong,
And shouldn’t have purchased his Speedo thong,
For the invite was for a concert – a “Singer for Pensioners”
And not what he thought – for “Swinger Conventioners”!
A contest entry
- Big Points Funny Rhymer VII by BuriedTreasures.
6000 points, ended October 27, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
very creative and so well done. Congratulations on the bronze.
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A clever and creative write---Good take on the picture. Good flow of the rhyming verse and I was particularly impressed with the last stanza!
This is a good entry!
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The concluding two lines wrapped up a wonderful piece extremely well Well done Good luck in the contest
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LMAO...Hysterically funny...good take on the prompt
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lolol...this is absolutely a howl! everything about it is terrific. Best of luck in the contest.
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Excellent & Hysterical !
ROFL
--- This is hilarious and with the dementia attributed to the golden years, it is also very feasable!
Very creative and imaginative take on the picture and the flow of the rhyming verse is flawless.
Final stanza is outstanding!--Well Done!
Trophy-Worthy in my opinion!
Good Luck in the contest!
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I wrote a poem for the contest this is in and then decided to check out what others had written. The first two lines of your poem already had me laughing and the conclusion had me laughing and cringing at the same time. Best of luck in the contest with this piece.
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