He's been inside me all along
laughing, mocking me
take pleasure from my pain
please dont go....
I cry, he laughs
happiness with misery
i cant take much more of this
why so far....
i feel like my body is being split in two
going different directions
i dont know how long i can hold off this beast
will you wait for me.....
Its almost like i mock myself
cause the devil lives inside me
i can't escape this hell
good bye....
Author notes
how is this for part 2
continuation of Save Me From This Nightmare
A contest entry
- Let us take on the Domain of HELL....all metaphors welcome! by ears2hearyou.
1200 points, ended November 7, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
did my muse come back?
Comments
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excellent..and yes..you did wonderful...you really
sliced it through to get to the heart of the matter.
ears/Seattle
how did this make you feel....???????
did it give energy and thought to stomping on the
devil?
ears
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