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Had you been there and done that



If you could have been there and done that
taken your share of his pain
Your share of his  shame, his mother's sorrow
'SECRETLY', so the guards would not see
And come up to you and say

'''It was you what done it weren't it
You somehow made it easier for him'''
knowing they would not knock you on the ground
And the cocky devil would not gloat and jeer
He cheated! He cheated! He cheated!
And you would not have lived in vain
But would your sins be forgiven?

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  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    February 10, 2009
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    very strong an powerful.... the imagery is great.! love the flow...

    becca