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Girl Or Guy

I sit here wishing that you would leave me alone,
I wish you would be gone.
You are not in control of my heart,
You try your best to break us apart.
So what if I go with a girl or guy,
You don't want to see us happy so you lie.
Why can't you see that we are people to,
Is it because we are different, so you don't know what to do.
You try your best to try to change me,
Your eyes show you things you don't want to see.
Why do you have to talk bad about everything I do,
I'm not here to please you.

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  • birch
    October 27, 2008
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    you can't please the world, so focus on seeing the beauty you possess and let that please you.