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So Much in Love.

Are we ready for the off lass,
shall we go and strut our stuff.
Me with all my attributes,
and you hot off the cuff.

You look just like Madonna,
and your figure's so divine.
My fisique still attracts the girls,
my biceps still refined.

Your hair a thing of beauty,
that adorns the sweetest face.
Mine's a wee bit thinner now,
but never out of place.

That leopard skin bikini,
fits you like a velvet glove.
Why, we haven't changed one little bit ,
we're still so much in love.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 25, 2008
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    This is great

    I so enjoyed the muse indeed great work here


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    November 7, 2008

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    so heart warming and brought and a smile..to be so in love blinds the eyes but warms the heart just as it should.... i simply loved it my dear sister


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    October 27, 2008
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    A good take on the prompt--Nice rhyme scheme.
    Thank you for your entry!


  • DolceVito gold member
    October 27, 2008
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    LMAO...Good take on the prompt


  • smiling-angel
    October 27, 2008
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    This is just awesome. What a beautiful take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
    sooty


  • Pearl-1
    October 25, 2008
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    awww beautiful poem
    from begining to end
    good luck in the contest
    June


  • Jesann gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    A wonderful take on the pic prompt!!
    Love the lines "Why, we haven't changed one little bit,
    we're still so much in love"....excellent.


    • Sunshine Always
      October 26, 2008
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      The pics just great isn't it......Bet I'll look like that when I'm ancient...Lol

  • Thomas beechey
    October 22, 2008
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    these could be lyrics to a song --- I can already hear the tune...I really like this!


  • wishintreeUK
    October 18, 2008

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    Beauty is in the eye of the beholder Mal, this is a super piece of humor. The first and last lines of the poem say it all, way to go girl... love this one, it has set me up for the day.

    Katie


    • Sunshine Always
      October 26, 2008
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      Katie my dearest friend, wonderful to hear from you love. Thanks so much for dropping in.. Great big hugs and love to you all..A kiss for Mr Mont,,xxx Well three then....Mal

  • Donna 20K
    October 17, 2008

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    Love is "BLIND" to be sure--a very creative and funny take on the picture!
    Good Luck in the contest!


    • Sunshine Always
      October 17, 2008
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      Hi Donna, nice to meet you. Many thanks for taking time to drop in at my place to read...Appreciated as always....mal


  • Legend silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    My dear friend another excellent piece from your trusty pen love the humour in this one What i want to know is where did you find the picture of me to go with It? love it good luck in the contest


    • Sunshine Always
      October 17, 2008
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      Hello my dear friend, Thanks for the lovely comment , and I really should tell you I took the pic on my phone as I was wizzing through your neck of the woods on wednesday..LOL. Bless you...mal

  • Bad Bill
    October 17, 2008

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    I like this highly entertaining poem a lot. Thank goodness for love's blindness, I say! By the way, is "fisique" a deliberate misspelling?

    Good one,
    Bill


    • Sunshine Always
      October 17, 2008
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      Hi Bill Glad you liked this one my friend, an no I didn't misspell it on purpose love. I guess you've gathered by now I wasn't at the top of the class.....LOL...Bless you for pointing it out.....mal...


  • hawkeslake gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    Excellent, and somehow exactly how love can continue as we age -- thank goodness for the blinders! When people ask my beloved what I look like, I am still described as I looked 20 years ago -- and then when people meet me, their eyes widen quite a bit --LOL! Such great and unusual rhymes, and I do so enjoy reading a good meaningful rhyme!


    • Sunshine Always
      October 17, 2008
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      Funny isn't it "H" how when we love someone we never ring the changes....Thank you as always for stopping by and reading....much appreciated...mal

  • Topnotchsy
    October 16, 2008

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    I gave this contest a shot, then figured I'd check out what others came up with for the prompt. Like this piece a lot. It's a great take on the prompt for starters, and it shows how blind love is, and when two people have a lifelong relationship it's exactly like this. Nice write, best of luck in the contest.


    • Sunshine Always
      October 17, 2008
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      Aw thanks alot "T", so nice of you to read and leave such a lovely comment...bless you...mal


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    leopard skin i remember well, 'M' i ripped it off lustily.. go for it and enjoy your freedoms good luck x


  • malmadre gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    Ha! Love is blind...yes it is.

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