In my mind hell is a place
Where their is no one with the same face
We all have problems we are all sick in the head
We've already made it so we sleep in our beds
We're not crazy we're not insane
We are just people with creative dimensions in our brain
Devil is either a woman or a man
It doesn't matter so he can-
Be either it doesn't matter anyways
He's just someone to hang out with everyday
No problems no torture no mess
He'll just put your mind to the test
To make sure you're in the right scene
Heaven or Hell is what I mean
For me hell is the choice
Somewhere, where I can speak my own voice
I'm already going their cause I'm The Chaos In Your Dreams
So I guess I'm playin on that team.
A contest entry
- Let us take on the Domain of HELL....all metaphors welcome! by ears2hearyou.
1200 points, ended November 7, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just something
Comments
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thanks I have always been sort of demented so that would explain where this comes from
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this is quite interesting, my mind seems torn in two tho. you make hell sound fun, yet i'm too light hearted to go there so heaven is for me
well written
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thanks I have always been sort of demented so that would explain where this comes from
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loved it!
I'm the Chaos in your dreams....
wonderful metaphor and simile...
and the matter of fact tone in your poem
lent it realism....that we could relate too!
and it does beg to ask?
when did hell become the destination of freedom
and bold strength of individual heart!
I enjoyed your first lines....asking us ...
is hell or heaven what we make it..or define
by what.....dogma...or creative dimensions of the
brain. WE do all have the same human frame and
varied equipment....your poem wisely written
and this soul...
believes you have A Strong Voice of Heaven
in your mighty soul!
May you keep that rebel pen full of ink.
WE celebrate your honesty and soul of might.
ears/Seattle
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