So, here we are, Manny and Flo
at what passes for a New Jersey beach,
in real leopard skin teeny bikinis
that over our paunches do not reach.
We are the envy of the Geritol crowd
as we sashay along that oily shore.
We get smiles from even the young ones
who seem to envy us all the more.
Manny was a stud in his better days,
and tales still pass amongst folks
of Flo's fanny in those tight capris,
a few lascivious, behind palms jokes.
No growing old and giving up, not us.
We plan to live to the hilt till we die.
Time doesn't bother Manny and Flo,
it takes a right and passes on by.
A contest entry
- Big Points Funny Rhymer VII by BuriedTreasures.
6000 points, ended October 27, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A clever and funny take on the picture.
Thank you for your entry!
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LMAO
Funny! Good take on the prompt
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lol. this was brilliant. i love your take on the prompt. Best of luck.
sooty
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Ha ha..grat take on your prompt here..You have a way with your humor, sis! Chuckling as I think it must be nice to be so unconscious as they are of how they look...Sashaying along, without a care..Wonder what they looked like in younger days..A riot to read and behold! Certainly not self conscious are they...A hoot of write!
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"Sashay along that oily shore!"--Great Line---A very clever and funny take on the picture--Good luck in the contest!
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Great piece, and an awesome take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest with it!! Love the names "Manny" and "Flo" for this.
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Lol
this is great. Damn I, not living far from the Jersey shore dare say. Ouch. Just filled with humor. But when I go to the shore I look at the young babes. Great write.
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