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days

the days come and go,
but my feelings for you are forever.
and so,
in my mind we will forever be together.
the temptations are unbarable!
i want to hold you close
(dont let me go!!
im so addicted to you that it hurts...
love is what i have for you


i love you

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    this is beautiful
    the honest outpouring of one's emotions to another

    great write


  • DeathlySins
    October 18, 2008
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    So pretty and heart felt


  • faderman1959
    October 17, 2008
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    Very romantic! Full of passion and desire. Well done.


  • xxBlack Dawnxx
    October 17, 2008

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    i realy like love poems, ive just split up from my man so i like all the heart felt poems, great write x


  • sensuous
    October 16, 2008

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    good

    such an open honest and pure write ..I like the way you interjected the word "so" it made that special touch to your poem...

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