Love Conquers All

I lay awake to hear you breathe
knowing I'm blessed that
you're next to me

Your hands of velvet touch my skin
feeling your loving touch
lost in suspended animation

Your gentle words soothe my worried mind
hearing your gentle words
my fears are eased

I took your hand in mine forever
loving you is bliss
together love conquers all

In a list

My Husband • next in list

A contest entry

Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger. 600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Love is joy, hope, faith, and compromise

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SmokinHotWhiteTiger
October 17, 2008
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Thank You for Entering
Well now that ending to your poem really sums this beautifully written poem up nicely. I do like how you just with absolutely no touch at all just allow the pen to glide over the paper and create such a beautiful poem. any ways over all a spectactular write. good work & good luck

Paloszoo
October 16, 2008

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I once felt this way about a man. It's so incredibly wonderful, and you've expressed it in the most beautiful way! Bravo, Sweetie!

princessleejwctlvr2
October 16, 2008

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sis this is so so beautiful and so sentimental and very sweet!! I love it!! This is an excellent write!! You did a fantabulous job!!

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