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When The Sky Cries

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When the sky cries
in tears that reach
deep into our hearts,
they will dry as before
and tomorrow will shine again.

For the sun does not die
though night should come,
light lives in every shadow,
hope is in the rainbow
after any shower
because it is a bridge to places
yet to touch.

Today may be full of questions,
but the answers are like flowers
waiting to bloom.

Rising in the springtime of our mind,
beauty to behold with their bloom
bring their song in our lives.

The laughter will come again
with all its joy
while passing through the moment
knowing something better and refreshing
always comes after any storm.

Author notes

I hope this helps in your time of suffering
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http://mintyferret.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/03/clouds.jpg

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Such beautiful comforting words. Bless you for sharing your heart. This is lovely.


    Az


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    A wonderful uplifting and hopeful poem that I know Az will love!



  • feetus
    October 17, 2008
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    Beautifully written.
    The third stanza really stands out to me.


  • aboomer silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    Beautiful! Love it all, but especially,

    'For the sun does not die
    though night should come,
    light lives in every shadow,
    hope is in the rainbow
    after any shower
    because it is a bridge to places
    yet to touch.'

    I'm sure Az will love this.
    best wishes


  • maralisa silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    a very beautiful poem I loved this poem I think your imagery is wonderful and to me nature is a healer of all things good luck in the contest


  • poppa
    October 16, 2008

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    Beautiful write... sure this would give everyone who reads it comfort..and I couldnt think of a better person to write something as wonderful as this for...


  • michellemybelle gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    This is beautiful, I love the nature metaphors and I know she will. Thank you so much for your kindness and care in this poem of light.
    blessings,
    Michelle


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 16, 2008
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    Beautiful, uplifting poem! Good luck in the contest!


  • John Dillinger
    October 16, 2008
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    nice

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    This is really nice for her my favorite stanza is the second and i am sure that it will bring some peace to her best wishes always be well

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