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Look!!!!!!!!!

Look they would fit
if only he would try
to make half of his heart mine
and half of my heart his
we could be together
I know you like me
I love you too much to let you go
I love your eyes
Your sweet smelling red hair
even though you may not match
or even see the color of my clothes
I still love you
you are so kind
you like me forme
Look you could be the one for me
the one I kiss goodnight
the one I hug
the one I go through highschool with
Look you want it
I know you do
I see it in your eyes
I will surly die
without my time with you
or mabe my life with you
Look at me when i ask will you go out with me
I love you

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  • justgot2loveme
    December 8, 2008

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    how could anyone say no to you after reading this lovely piece of poetry.
    This is so sweet.
    Thanks for sharing and good luck

    Justgot2loveme

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    Very nice. Filled with passion and deepness.
    Thanks for sharing and entering my contest.
    Good luck.
    Brian