Look they would fit
if only he would try
to make half of his heart mine
and half of my heart his
we could be together
I know you like me
I love you too much to let you go
I love your eyes
Your sweet smelling red hair
even though you may not match
or even see the color of my clothes
I still love you
you are so kind
you like me forme
Look you could be the one for me
the one I kiss goodnight
the one I hug
the one I go through highschool with
Look you want it
I know you do
I see it in your eyes
I will surly die
without my time with you
or mabe my life with you
Look at me when i ask will you go out with me
I love you
A contest entry
- Ages 14 and under: YOUR FAVORITE PREWRITE by Sky Prince Ireland.
800 points, ended December 15, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your most personal & meaningful poem from ( 2008 ) by justgot2loveme.
1500 points, ended December 11, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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how could anyone say no to you after reading this lovely piece of poetry.
This is so sweet.
Thanks for sharing and good luck
Justgot2loveme
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Very nice. Filled with passion and deepness.
Thanks for sharing and entering my contest.
Good luck.
Brian

