when time has gone, things are made,
to which one may not desire, but it is made,
trials and tribulations, he suffices,
to regain hope, that way, back to a better time,
from when it was just you and I.
A contest entry
- SAD Poetry--- Let Me Have Your Best by Ativan.
900 points, ended November 2, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I like what you are saying in this poem and the message you are sending the readers. I only wish it were longer and more poetic. Having made at the end of both the first two sentences makes it a little hard to read. Nevertheless, I think you did an excellent job but as I said, I wish it were longer.
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