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Foolish

Sleep came
Slowly last night
There where birds
singing at midnight
like the sun was rising
for the first time last night
And you where there
In the back of my mind
And I wonder where you went
And I wonder how you are
I know your lying somewhere
Goodnight sleeping
In and out of comas
Your breathing is
Pausing ever now and again

And can you feel me watching?
Do you know I am right there
Waiting for you to wake up?
You are not alone tonight
The birds are singing
Breath in, Breath out
Let this be your guiding light

Sometimes I wonder how life
Has left you so confused
And why
Why you walked away
It was foolish

Author notes

Eh. A friend I haven't talked to in a long time is apparently in the hospital due to trying to be a hero.

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  • Bob Fox
    October 18, 2008

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    Life

    things not always pleasent happen. It is our faults that we must try to fix and then good things happen. But the poets words are felt.


  • JaydinC
    October 17, 2008

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    wow...speechless. I actually almost teared up when I read that. No joking. The way you wrote that piece was indescribably beautiful, and then your authors notes brought a whole new meaning to it. Thank you for this.