the fiers, fiery eye watching you from the deapths of hell
who is the god of this unforgetable place? who controls it all?
the dead and suffering, watching over their unforgivable lives
does anyone deserve to be here? does anyone really deserve to die?
No-one can escape this nightmare. no-one is ever fully forgiven
as he watches over you, burning, uncontrolably as you try not ot stare
anything the dirty beast touched just turnes to dust before your eyes
as he bullys, beats and destroys the soals of the recent dead
his deadly, mad brain, surley not of the human sort
his long witchy fingers, behold that of evil, no-one dares touch
wandering around in eternal hell, nowhere else to go
this is the punishment of a darkened life destroyed by death
these are the horrors of..... hell
A contest entry
- Let us take on the Domain of HELL....all metaphors welcome! by ears2hearyou.
1200 points, ended November 7, 2008, 29 entries
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good poem!thank you you need to keep writing too!!
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well done...made me tremble...a life of constant nightmares terror....would certainly make us think
twice....about certain decisions in our life.
I think you are a poet of great strength, do you have
a second write in you....what contemporarily do you
see around you...are we being seduced by greed..and
lust ...or do we blame the devil for every mis-trust?
What does your ink say?
ears/Seattle
well done!
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wow u defenatly expressed a powerfull vission of hell great job
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