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allusion and faith

Strangely is the allusion one must suffer
The poetic heart thus weeps for this belief
Within the emotive soul that breathes
The sheer intoxicating joy of being alive
Open your eyes and see life clearly
That there is nothing to be saved from,
No struggle of life against the universe
Arise and come with a heart that rejoices
Shining love’s beauty; giving Joy on earth
Soul of nature that gives life to the universe
heaven is now  on the green pulsing earth

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Sweetheart...

    How you offer me hope and peace in the midst of turmoil and strife. Your strong shoulder has been my sanctuary so often. Thank you for the love and care you surround me with day by day...moment by moment.

    Blessed Be Love~
    ~Azlyn~

    This is beautiful in so many ways.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    to slow down in body but most importantly in mind.
    when we are able to do this we are indeed in heaven and aligned with the divine
    so much joy to being alive
    beautiful words in a lovely write
    God bless you my friend...


  • moon2u
    October 17, 2008
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    this is so uplifting and hopeful
    my new favourite of yours


  • bigperm
    October 16, 2008

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    nice piece brother, I enjoy how you've poured so much emotion into a write of this size...again best of luck on the contest


  • michellemybelle gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    ahhh Robert, this is lovely, and just like you, full of light. YOu know this will mean alot to her!
    blessings,
    Michelle


  • aboomer silver member
    October 16, 2008

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    Beautiful, so uplifting and full of love and peace.
    Very nice!! I'm sure Az will love this, and it will lift her spirit.
    best wishes


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    Soul of nature that gives life to the universe
    heaven is now on the green pulsing earth

    Wow, this is just an eye opener for me. Such an uplifting, spiritual piece this is. Spectacular! Thanks for sharing this one with us, and good luck in the contest!

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