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Im Tired

Im tired of everybody thinkin that im some kind of slut when nothing happened.

When i lost you a lot of things went threw my mind like i cant believe you did this to me i thought i could trust with my heart but i guess i was wrong and that kills me.

When i see another girl around you. i start

iT jus came to me

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • broken-n-shattered
    December 18, 2008

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    kool

    it turned out pretty good. try to get your thoughts organized and put them into stanzas. it would make it really great. but you've got a great start already. keep up the good work.


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 16, 2008

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    I bet lots of people can relate to this. I hope that writing this helped you in some way or another, and I hope that things will get better for you soon.

    Also on the second line:
    Threw = Through

    Good job writing this.

    Take care