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Porcelian Dolls

We all are like porcelian dolls,
Easy to break, yet hard to make.
Hearts so pure, dreams so vivid,
But it can break with one bad heartache.
So many secrets, so scared to tell,
Become paranoid, so you try to avoid.
But the things you did can't be forgotten,
They haunt you, you don't know what to do.
We all are like porcelian dolls,
Easy to break, yet hard to make.
Everyone knows this, everyone in the world,
You, me, even the ones reading can see.
You want my advice? Well here it is,
Don't dwell on the past, the moments won't last.
Take some time to recover, a day or a year,
I know it takes a while, but God's a good engineer.

Author notes

umm i guess i kinda used all of the prompts but porcelain dolls would be the main thing i guess...

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  • HaileeDear
    October 16, 2008

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    i dig the style. its like, a journal entry kind of. Giving your views on life is amazing when you can write it out. Your opinion is strong and i love how you just put it out there.
    thanks so much for entering
    <3