light
flutters
stony thoughts
through new river
roads
Author notes
A lanturne.
Syllable count: 1/2/3/4/1
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXVII - by Bear by Arkbear.
400 points, ended October 16, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Outstanding
I liked the unexpected flow of images here that create a fine picture. Your imagery is very strong. A wonderful lanturne written with great simplicity. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you, that's a great compliment. And its only my first one
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One word "Beautiful"
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Thank you sis
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Excellent
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thank you, it was just a try
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Hey Nev
Aesthetics are okay....L 2 is a tad off......not much, but enough for me to notice
Great Theme and nice play and movement on words.......it's so good to see you in the contest
Good luck & God bless you!
Bear ~
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Thanks ~Bear, L2 I had to look for in a dictionary if it also exist in English
Hope you doing well and may God also bless you
Nevel
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