Thump.Thump.Thump
Sixty beats per minute.
Thump.Thump.Thump
It’s like the clock is ticking in another language
Locked inside my chest.
Breathe in.Breathe out
Suck in the carbon dioxide
Blow out the oxygen
Until you
.just.can’t.take.it.anymore.
Thump…Thump…Thump
But that’s not quite right
Is it?
Cough up the glitter from your lungs
[Let it out]
Gasp & gulp the chemical air
[That’s right baby,
Hold it down.]
Thump.Thump.Thump
The pendulum swings
Marking time in my ribcage
And years under my eyes.
Author notes
Written 16.10.08
This is terribly icky... You have my apologies lovie.
10. "Don't Stop the Heartbeat Counting."
A contest entry
- I feel so dirty[[pretty]] --With a ~twist~-- by BenziRae.
720 points, ended November 19, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a unique poem
very creative
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I love it!!!
This is amazing!!!!
Great job hun ♥


