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Way Too Long, So Finally.

I have waited for this for so long.

 

I have watched you from a distance

for too long.

 

I have longed to be yours

for too long.

 

I have waited for this moment

forever.

 

Finally, alone, our passion can be shared.

I thought you never saw me,

but now I am your full attention.

 

You sit on the end of my bed.

I slowly approach you and climb on your lap, facing you.

 

We just cant handle the lust, as you pull my head towards yours and kiss me passionately.

 

Finally I taste your soft lips, I can smell the sweet smell on your skin.

 

I undo the buttons

down my blouse.

 

One

 

by

 

One.

 

Slowly and seductively,

you run your hands over my lace bra.

Reaching behind

and undoing the catch.

 

Your own shirt comes off

as I see your bare chest,

I know

I have longed for this

for too long.

 

Finally the moment

is ours,

as you stand

and pull off my skirt

as I undo your jeans

and see your hard throbbing.

 

You kiss my neck,

both breathing heavy,

 all

the way

down

to my red underwear.

 

You run your hand

over the front

before pulling them off

s l o w l y

with your teeth.

 

I never thought

in one million years

that you would now stand before me

as I remove your boxers

and you enter inside me.

 

Falling back on the bed,

It lasts a long time,

when you finally come,

we are both

completely satisfied.

 

This is it.

This moment I have longed for,

is over.

 

And it was more incredible

then I could ever have dreamed of.

 

Now

I suppose

we go back

to where we were.

 

Never talking.

Never looking.

Never knowing.

 

All I can think of,

as I lie against your chest,

is that I have been used.

 

Again.

 

A tear runs down my cheek.

You see and sit up.

You wipe the tear away.

 

As though reading my mind,

you say

"I'm not going anywhere."

 

 

 

 

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  • written-in-ink
    November 1, 2008

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    this
    was so aww

    and then just intense

    idk

    hahah
    i see where this came from you know?

    really good job


  • Sinfully Yours
    November 1, 2008

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    Awww! At first I thought the fantasy finally happened where they both fall in love. Then halfway through I thought oh so she's totally in love with him and he's just using her. And then you really surprised me at the end! Great job and good luck!


    • November-Dani
      November 1, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your kind comment. I alwayse love feed-back on my poems. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
      Dani.


  • Hannie
    October 17, 2008
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    lol good work dani....2 erotica's in a row!! lol

    Good write

  • misterfish
    October 17, 2008
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    I loved it...very well done. I like the personal touch at the end.


  • Maxboy gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    Very nice, I especially like the way you put the twists at the end, nice touch for the ending.

    Best wishes in the contest.


  • Deathcore
    October 17, 2008

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    im just going to print this off and take it behind a bush...haha joking. I must say this is my favourite of your eroticas


  • chilali
    October 16, 2008

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    Very erotic indeed! Niice write! Well done Good luck in the contest. This should do EXTREMELY well!!

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