Breathing lightly in the gentle mist,
Sunset sparkling on the
lake like some forgotten
star fell down from nightly skies,
Roses wilting, glistening
upon the lake
like candles burning
across the horizon,
Gentle winds lapping
at the evergreen trees,
framing the lake like borderline towers,
Majestic mountains, delicate snow shimmers
in the distance,
Lost in this serenity,
I wonder if anything in this life could hold
more perfection,
Author notes
I hope you like this 
In a list
A contest entry
- #4 Prompt by katzeyez.
1000 points, ended October 17, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I write to invoke feelings, which ones did I invoke within you?
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I think that this is beautiful sweety you always amaze me good luck to you in the contest best wishes always be well
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Great!
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I see very few Happiness poems which lift you up, but this one certainly did.
Excellent.
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Oh I do love this! It certainly sounds like perfection to me. Beautiful imagery indeed.That second stanza would have to be my favourite.
Thank you for entering.
Katz xx -
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Thank you I love your cat picture
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I did like it indeed.Brilliantly beautiful write, like most of your poems! Love the first two stanzas. Xds-gX
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peace and romance
wow i love it especally the last part
Lost in this serenity,
I wonder if anything in this life could hold
more perfection,...
thats just beautiful and the way u painted a picture i could really see the seine u were expresing..
i could really imagen see my self on the edge of a lake in the arms of my love watching that view and feeling those feelingg.. its beautiful really
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