Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Serenity

I close my eyes and drift away starting to think of you,
Going to a place i don't often get to.

Far from where i really am
I float into a calm quiet

A little voice inside my head
says let it go don't fight it

A tiny thin smile gradually grows onto my face
beginning to enjoy the peacefulness why let it go to wast

The smell of rain and distant sound of water drops swiftly come to mind
Going back to the simpleness to which we all are bind

Letting the past vanish as it simply disappears
floating far away from all of it, getting rid of all my fears

The weightlessness i feel as i go deeper i start to feel my best
a tickling sweet sensation as laughter fills my chest

Surrendering to the openness giving in to what i feel
knowing that in the end nothing matters this is what is real

shedding all the layers that clutter up my soul
breathing in the beauty as i strive to become whole

starting to realize that everything has a meaning
my conciseness struggles and slightly starts leaving

i don't know how long its been since i haven't made a peep
going to my peacefully place Ive drifted off to sleep

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Bob Fox
    November 25, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Peace

    I think we all tend to drift off at times looing for that peace. But poet words can also bring on comfort. Well done young poet.


  • Ingrid wastegash
    October 23, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    oh effective

  • evelynxxoo
    October 16, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    i like that idea of drifting away you feel happy calm and content with life when it happens i would grab it with both hands and hope to go to sleep for a long time