flowers, blue
want to try a piece of candy
and take it by the hand
I'd like to taste your piece of candy
not intending to just demand...
I grasp like it's a baby
and kiss it sweet and tender
your love to me means the world
for it has no gender
it is what it is
and you are just the same
no one else could take your place, my baby
and to love another name
I would never.
because… well, I want you forever
& I especially like it when you kiss me
and bring me flowers, blue
& when you touch in midst of night
and say I love you, too
because you are my sun
and I can be your star
Love me the same, till the end
and us- oh… we'll go far.
hit it.
Comments
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This is really sweet, and yet there is some erotic subtext to it that really gets to me. I love the idea of candy and of them being that sweet to you, and I'm a big fan of the color blue as well. I think you have a gift for writing beautiful poetry and you should keep doing it and sharing it with us here on allpoetry.com. Bravo on a remarkable piece that is really romantic and brings us into the world of these two lovers. I enjoyed the whole thing!
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This is really a emotive poetic piece bringing the feel of the love in each and every word ..the impact is joyful and the impression is beautiful as well..well done..
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