rolling skates-
in her bag
cake crumbles
surprise party
her dog licks
a dropped cake
birthday ball
Darlene debuts
at the 70th house
Author notes
Wishing you a very happy birthday! Keep the skates rolling!
This is a JFTJOI entry, not to be judge 
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday, J aime coudre by catz.
1200 points, ended October 19, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulations on the emerald award... wonderful haiku here,there is joy in watching our birthday cakes crumble...year after year and for many more years to come...h
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Always partying (birthdays, any excuse), always writing well always stripped bear, revealing naked truth. Always impressing me, impressing others. Always… thank you.
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How revealing!!!
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Thanks for the nice haiku Gaze...I think those were my bones crumbling with the skates though
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This is amusing considering some of Darlene's recent ventures and misadventures
Thank you so much for this delightful piece to wish her a Happy Birthday and good luck in the contest I know, I know... you said not for judging but like Yem says... who pays attention to that 
Dee
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Yes, she letting things fall (twice) and her rolling the skates, or was it the skates rolling her
Pay attention! Pay attention!!!
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70! Wow that's like old!
When I think of the Darlene and roller skates story I hear that silly old song, "I got a brand new pair of roller skates." She'll appreciate that you entered and we know she likes haiku. Stop that "just for the" thing, No one listens to that.
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Ah, but I got the only one I like! few more and I'll have a full row of green, yay!!!
Now go open some contests
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I love birthday cakes
and so is zadee...I think the dog ate all of it lol
enjoyed reading this, and Happy Birthday to Ms Darlene a.k.a J aime coudre?
Anna Lee
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Birthday cakes taste better than 'regular' cakes, don't they?
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I agree but I guess since I have a sweet tooth, I like both cakes.
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