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Surrender

An angry rain,
A stroke of light,
Tonight this beauty
Surrenders the fight

Moss coated floor,
Rotting trees,
She’ll promise tonight,
Swear to be free.

A blood spackled dawn,
Red fading light,
Her heart in her fist,
The air grows too tight

The forest cries,
The twilight forlorn,
The blade on her breast,
Secretly mourns.
She
  Lets
Go.

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  • sophia moonfairy
    November 28, 2008
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    Wow this is amazing I like the imagination in this piece :] great write