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Life on Empty

Hollow is the heart that once carried joy and love.
Shallow is the pride and life that once dwell-ed.

Your fingertips could leave marks upon the marred surface..

No one is home within these darkened eyes.

You used to be able to see all that layed within..

Now just a deflated empty shell is all that remains. 

 

 

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  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    April 30

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    What a shattered person this must be. I can feel the pain in this piece Michelle. Portrayed perfectly too, I might add. I said I might!
    O.K., I added it.


    • Selenas
      April 30
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      I wrote this about how I felt a few years back, how I was...I was eventually kinda saved by my uncle before I did something bad to myself. But yeah...was kinda depressed the day I wrote this and was starting to re-lapse sorta, in a weird way, but not at the same time. *just got out of the hospital after 2 weeks in thinking I was gonna lose a leg, though I didn't..thank goodness, but the drugs they put me on depressed the hell outta me.