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I'm the King and You're the Queen

Female and male,
We meet that requirement,
But mismatched inside,
We complete the other,
But can't coincide.
I don't brush my hair,
Nor remember to eat,
I seek out the just,
And dole out advice.
You check yourself out,
Stare into the mirror,
Popping zits and geling your hair,
Sometimes you're a terror.
I swear it sometimes,
I think we're both gay,
I am the King,
And you are the Queen,
But we don't both fit on one stage.


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  • hawkeslake gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    This is great -- good specific images. Only change recommended is that you have two "sometimes" right next to each other. But I don't have a recommendation this time. An excellent glimpse into cupid's ironic targets -- they aren't always logical!