Lost in thought
That’s where I’ve been
Making sense of Naught
Bringing shimmer to sheen
I may have wandered
But not to nowhere
When I looked into life’s eyes
I did more than just stare
In the mist of today
Lies a rainbow of tomorrow
A hope of the day
Lies in the night’s sorrows
The battle, the fight
May have brought me to knees
But the better judgment of sight
Is in the eyes of who sees
In the days of perpetual darkness
The faith of those who be
In the might of insanity
The strength of what is me
Author notes
I have written after months of a writers bloc...I am begining to wonder if I have completely lost my poteic ability
is it any good at all...i'm trying to rediscover the poet in me
Comments
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No, you're poetic ability is not lost, it is returning with a promise of more to come. 'But not to nowhere' sounds a tad awkward, IMHO
Your meaning comes through well. Keep pen to paper, kudos!
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great.
I really enjoyed this. It was quick and easy to read but held a more complex message that I thought about for a while afterwords. I hope you get over your writers block soon.
A Bientot
SV
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Verbal Conjunctivitis.
Too many common every day words. Splice it down to it's meaning....
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