you come into my life once more
and again my heart opens the door
no expectation is given
i just wanna start livin
seeking answers of what went wrong before
questions begin to unravel
each word is like walking on gravel
trying to decipher each movement
with good judgement from self improvement
as learned throughout the course of my travel
i listen to words you've spoken
hurting over a past that's broken
remembering all the lies
as you ask for compromise
and a door of forgiveness swings open
My heart begins to remember the love
and the world we could rise above
the city was our playground
as everything was newfound
Hence began the story of our life,thereof.
i forgot all the things that i felt
after playing the cards that you dealt
a claim of once loving
this girl you were shoving
from the pits of disaster we dwelt
thank you for your wonderful words
your appology was greatly preferred
then i replay your lies
listening to alternated replies
as the truth, it finally occurred
You survive in your laziness
and excuse all your ignorance
i have not the time
for any rehearsed line
there's just nothing left here to impress
so, in closing of words unspoken
remembering all things you've broken
just know i did love you
this boy that i once knew
a past memory that now remains frozen
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Wow this poem hit close to home. It actually opened my eyes to what I should do. Thank you for the great write.
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thanks. was written to my xhusband who found me on myspace and appologized for the way he treated me,and of course it sends your emotions rampid for a while when put in the predicument of looking at someone who made a drastic impact on your life. but one has to come to terms with reality also in order to move forward.
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your rhyme scheme was done very well
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thank you. it took me a few days to come back to, trying to say the things i wanted to say. took some thinking and a few come backs. few lines here, and there. one of the few i've done that way. but thanks. i never actually got to read it to the person though. sometimes we feel things one day and it changes the next, and some of that was the case in this one. thanks again.
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you're welcome
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..... I love it.... I had to read it twice though. BEAUTIFUL~
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very nice flow. very interesting. beautiful write, i can relate. you captured the emotion in every line. great write. very impressive
~Madison~
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AWESOME
wow, this has left me speechless... Awesome, awesome, awesome...
yvonne
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