She just cant wait for him
A contest entry
- Six Words by still.she.waits.
300 points, ended October 20, 2008, 58 entries
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What did you think
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ok Taylor
this is a bit wired
bt any way lol
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Hard to comment on this, really
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I guess when you're asked to just write a six word poem....there's no need to try too hard. I'm used to reading longer poems so I'll stop here. For six words, OK I guess.
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This was interesting... especially for a half dozen words. This would be seven, though, if it weren't for the apostrophe... but I guess that is part of a rule in the poem--that apostrophes don't count as a word.
I still think it was pretty good. I will read more of your stuff soon, Taylor. It's good so far and I'll read at least one more before stopping for the night. Keep up the great work and it'll only get better.
8/10 for the length. -
Simple,effective but you seriously need to rethink your penchant for all things lime green.
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