Watching the water collide into the rock
standing up high on this bridge
looking into your beautiful eyes
remembering all the times we shared
feeling your touch upon my skin
hearing your breath steady and calm
nothing could make me happier..
Grabbing your hand we continue to walk
feeling your heart beating faster
mine starting to gain speed
looking at the car
we both know what awaits beyond those doors
Opening your door I watch you get in
closeing it slowly behind you
Walking slowly to the drivers side
I climb in looking into your eyes
Kissing you, breathing geting heavy
I pull away to ask you
if indeed its me you want
wasteing no time your voice comes
fast at first, slowing down towards the end
If there was anything in this world,
I wanted more then anything its you..
Closeing my eyes
feeling your warmth over take my body
I surrender to the touch
letting go of the past
I embrace the future
cold chills multiply
my breathing loud
Opening my eyes
I see your beautiful complection
caught in a daze..
my hands find all the right places
please never let me go
I whisper..
knowing silence over took my request
the smile on your face regains my excitment
no more worrys I say soft as the wind..
im yours for the taken..
Author notes
mmm... love
whats the word
Comments
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Superb
Aye, 'tis a fine romantic write, and a tribute to relationships. Reminds me, somewhat, of an old Simon & Garfunkel song: "Bridge Over Troubled Waters". A link in a moment, for those who may not have heard of it:
http://www.google.com/search?sourceid=navclient&ie=UTF-8&rls=RNWO,RNWO:2008-24,RNWO:en&q=%3CBridge+Over+Troubled+Waters+%2D+Simon+%26+Garfunkel%3E -
Sweet and tender, and reminded me of one night on the cliffs behind the brewery on St. Clair Avenue... ah, but that's another story. Your writing is (obviously)quite evocative, and your talent for description is awsome. Enjoyed reading this very much!


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