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Undefeated

If I lost my eyes, my hearing, or my voice-
I would still have the ability to write
My intellect, emotions and my insight

If I could not write, I still have my free choice-
Even if my  life is taken this moment from me
I still have my soul and the eternity that it brings






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  • I love it inspiring =) Good for you, Kudos
    Good luck
    Ollie
    xxx


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 5

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    Hoodwinked!

    This is an amazing piece.
    You show that even without writing, you still have a life. It is something I think we forget, often.

    Shari


  • tawk gold member
    January 23

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    Amazing poem sis, so full of faith and hope. Thanks for bringing to light that no matter what happens in life there is always another door that opens. Congrats on the Bronze. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talents. hugs Theresa


  • sheltered
    October 21, 2008
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    this has a really hopeful tone that one can't help but adore. congrats


  • Venugopal gold member
    October 19, 2008
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    What a depth this poem conveys, best of luck in the contest


  • poetgypsie
    October 16, 2008
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    lovely

    It's not the amount of words you penn'd it's the amount of emotion within. thanks for shareing


  • Sandal
    October 16, 2008

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    good one!

    There is so much more to us than appears. I like this little poem for its courage and faith. Best wishes!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 15, 2008

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    So true and a wonderful thought for
    this contest my friend! All the best
    to you here!




    Jeremy0826

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