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The Dedications

I am the moon,
The world is my sky,
I am the wave;
Hear my loud cry.
I am the will,
I am enflamed.
This is my being,
But what is my name?

I am the sword,
I am the shield.
I have a handle,
But none suit to wield.
I am the earth,
Hear my loud cry,
When my battle is over,
I know I shant die.

I am the will,
This is my flame.
(s)he is the one,
Whom my heart will save.
I am the moon,
I am the sun.
My night is over,
My time is done.

I am the frost,
But I am their flame.
Compare anyone to me,
There is no one the same.
My heart has been claimed,
At my body, its cost.
But my heart lies with my friends,
So nothings been lost.

Author notes

This was made really interestingly actually. Each stanza represents a great friend of mine, and one of myself.

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  • Deathwolf Tasagka
    November 15, 2008

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    Very interesting indeed it was. It gave a deep, inspiring both self and open tune. Lovely how it reformed to what am I? And the outcome. Very good indeed. Great write.

    Sincerely,
    Deathwolf Tasagka