Acid reflux,
swallowing poisonous thoughts,
images of them,
bitter love flows
Twisted strands,
snake around gnarled fingers,
stale breath blanketing,
nocturnal, haunting silence
Every truth succumbs to lies,
half right, pristine white
just like blackened ash,
mixed with silent tears,
vicinity coated,
smothered in gray
Author notes
prompts used:
Quote:
"No, I will not listen to the words you speak
I will not listen to your twisted lies
Or bitter insults
That try to bring me down"
- POISONDAGGERS
WordBank:
lies
bitter
twisted
haunting
silence
written 10/17/08
A contest entry
- FALLING APART by Temptation..
525 points, ended November 17, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave comments,I appreciate the feedback
Comments
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wow. your imagery in this is amazing. =O i love it. and your word choice... is... wow. lol. im not a person of many words today... but this is really good. thank you so much for entering it into my contest.
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Poem:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3838691
Pic:
http://photo-nic.deviantart.com/art/Hear-See-Speak-50919669
Title:
No
Quote:
"No, I will not listen to the words you speak
I will not listen to your twisted lies
Or bitter insults
That try to bring me down"
- POISONDAGGERS
WordBank:
lies
bitter
twisted
haunting
silence
good luck!!!
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