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I Miss You

You had me spellbound and wrapped around your heart,
We were forever, like soul mates, only better.
No, we weren't involved, but we were close-we had love, and thats all that matters.
Then the drifting picked up and the nightmare began.

Now i'm bound and gagged in the back of your mind, never to be remembered.
My mirror image has been shattered to pieces by your very own fist,
And i'm lying in pieces at your feet; with you looking down on me.
I cry every night and put on a smile every day.
They say, it only takes one smile to hide a million tears.


Your bark is much milder than your bite, i must conclude.
You left me with nothing much more i can say.
So remember as you're walking the halls of this school,
I think about you every fucking day.

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wound
bite
love
shattered
nightmare

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  • Temptation.
    October 17, 2008

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    i like the title like it is. =] and im speechless when it comes to the poem. this is amazing. i can relate to this in so many ways. i wish i could say more... but i guess im in shock. wow. thank you so much for entering and good luck!


  • Temptation.
    October 16, 2008
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    Poem:
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2806348

    Pic:
    http://don-paolo.deviantart.com/art/don-t-miss-you-at-all-33368065

    Title:
    I Miss You

    Quote:
    "I can close my eyes but I’m still going to miss you
    When my eyes lie open you consume my every thought
    And as I sleep your in my nightmares,never to be forgot. "
    - POISONDAGGERS

    WordBank:
    wound
    bite
    love
    shattered
    nightmare

    good luck!!!