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Passions Current

A porcelain frame taunts,
the touch of my lips to her quivering skin.
Electrical currents surge from my mouth,
connecting.

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  • chilali
    December 10, 2008
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    Amazing take on the prompt. I really loved this! Well done. Keep it flowing.

    Much love
    Ylova


  • spiritualangel
    October 26, 2008
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    Beautiful.Best of Luck.


  • penman gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Alyzeh
    October 20, 2008
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    So very sensual and short. Love it!


  • maralisa silver member
    October 17, 2008
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    aw wow a wonderful take on the promt very sensual good luck in the contest


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    October 16, 2008

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    A lot of sensual content in a minimum of words!!
    Very well Done


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 16, 2008

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    This is very very well written sis!! This is excellent!! You did such a marvelous job!! Great details and descriptions!!


  • Three Doves
    October 16, 2008

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    Such strong passion in so few words. Excellent my friend. Best wishes in life and the contest.
    Peace in light and love.
    Noah

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