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My Dark Knight

I seek for love
I search for someone who will hold me
For the one person who will save me
But I fall short

No white knight will come to my rescue
Only countless dark knights bent on destroying me
I cannot find to one thing I truly desire
Love

It seems like all of my dreams have been lost
Plunged into the shadows of my mind
Never to come true
Will they just fade away into nothingness

Slowly I begin to hate this word
Love
Who believes in such a thing
It’s just a false hope, never to happen

For those who have fallen into the illusion
For those that have false truths
For those that dream of this nonexistent concept
I am sorry

Author notes

I used the poem and quote as a prompt.

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  • Harlequin Dance
    November 17, 2008

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    I like this poem. It's very nicely done. You know what I thought of when I first saw the title and read the poem? The movie The Dark Knight, if only because your poem and the movie both have contrasting images of dark knight and white knight, both of whom are fighting for the same love


  • Temptation.
    October 17, 2008

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    you did an amazing job with both prompts. well since the quote is from the poem it might as well be just the poem lol. i just realized that. i love how you twisted it, instead of searching for your white knight, it doesnt exist. thank you so much for entering and good luck.

  • PoodleBoy13
    October 17, 2008
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    alls i can say is spose...


  • Temptation.
    October 16, 2008
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    Poem:
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/4488951

    Pic:
    http://double-minded.deviantart.com/art/Hold-Me-52491083

    Title:
    My Dark Knight

    Quote:
    "And in this bleak world
    Full of love and hate
    In your arms is where I belong
    Safe from the damned."
    - POISONDAGGERS

    WordBank:
    white
    dark
    lost
    love
    hate

    good luck!!!