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Losing You

What keeps me holding on?
I can't understand it
It's like  I  want something back
that  I know I can't have
i thought I gained closure
and maybe  I did
but perhaps not all the way
Words are lost on me
I don't know what to say

I want to move on
and i have for the most part
gotta keep things in perspective
don't wanna lose true friends
over a friendship that didn't last beyond a summer
he might come back into my life eventually
    I don't know how much hope I can bank on that anymore

I guess a part of my heart
that was borken
never completely healed
but I wonder why  I stil want to be
friends with him?

What keeps me hanging on
so long to thoughts of him?
I just don't know


All I know is that I'm  glad
that I decided not to be
Audrey from  Little Shop of Horrors
for Halloween.

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  • PoetryGirl26
    October 21, 2008

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    I think it's hard to let go of someone we truely loved, even if they never truely loved us. It took me two years to get over my best friend/boyfriend from high school and he never seemed to care about what we had..but it meant so much to me that I just couldn't let go for so long and it hurt me becuase it hindered me from falling for another even more amazing and understanding guy but I finally did overcome my fear of losing myself and am now with a guy who truely cares about me. So yeah...it just takes time. ::hugs::

  • Shoca
    October 16, 2008
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    name?

    what is your REAL name?

  • Shoca
    October 16, 2008
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    powerful

    I like this poem but the title should be called
    LOSING YOU!