wander aimlessly in the dark
surround myself with pieces of a shattered heart
blood stains my soul and tears my face
in your eyes the worlds disgrace
rebeling against that i view as wrong
singing along to loud dark songs
no lnger praying to what doesnt exist
finally realized hell is life such as this
immortality is so vague and unclear
so much easier to just not be here
screams whispering in my thoughts
silent accusations in memories fought
trying to figure out what to do
so fucking sick of trying to figure out you
now just pretending it is all okay
maybe ill forget it aint one day
just searching inthe night and led by the pain
groping for warmth in the downpour of freezing rain
a terrified rebel without a cause and no way to see
alone, until forever finds me
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until forever finds me
okay ill admit really badw rite..idk...just...i caint think straight lol
A contest entry
- because i feel like it.... (options) by VerminVomit.
1300 points, ended November 2, 2008, 23 entries
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"blood stains my soul and tears my face
in your eyes the worlds disgrace"
"screams whispering in my thoughts
silent accusations in memories fought"
"just searching inthe night and led by the pain
groping for warmth in the downpour of freezing rain" wow, you have great rhymes in here
this is a pretty good poem, you actually used the prompt (unlike some others who entered)
its a good poem, but this topic is becoming repetative and a bit too common
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